1st Peer Review

Peer Review

https://katelyncommins.wordpress.com/2016/03/16/aus-literature-post-1/comment-page-1/#comment-2

Hello Kateyn, First of all I love the way you spell your name!
I really enjoyed reading your blog, your writing style is very smooth and easy to read which is exactly what you want in a piece of writing. You have effectively conveyed your thoughts towards the subject through the language choices you used along with your examples. A few of your expressions made me pause and think – that is such a great way of looking at it. For example “…bringing flora and fauna of an area with different conditions to one with its own unique native plants and animals makes something completely natural into something that is not natural in its entirety.” That is such a good observation to make and would be a great point to put in an essay if it could be linked. My only critique would be to maybe add some quotes to your entry just to make a more sound argument and if the reader hadn’t read That Deadman Dance before a quote would really give them a good grasp as to what you are commenting on! Good work! I think I’ll keep you in mind when doing my future peer reviews! 🙂

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