2nd Peer Review

Hi Gabrielle,
I really enjoyed this blog post and can relate to it loads. I like the way you have analysed the artwork. it is very clear and comprehensive with a great depth. Your insight has added to my depth of knowledge and opinion of this work, especially your idea on the mountain being the central focus of the painting. It is easy to get lost in the details of the construction and possible fatality, however when you stand back and take it as a whole the power the natural rock and waterfall encompasses the audience. Maybe in future blogs you could break up your different points into one paragraph just so it is more succinct. Overall love it and very well written:)


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