Peer Review 1

Hey Sara,
Great entry! I like that you saw a special focus on Paul’s relationship with Kat. As I began to read the book I felt there was more coming from that friendship and was delighted with every bit of their relationship Remarque reveals. I agree with you completely when you say it is this friendship that can make readers today wonder upon their own intimate relationships. The only suggestion I would make is for this to longer.. purely for the fact that I enjoyed reading it and feel you would have lots more perspectives I can agree with. Good job🙂

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