Peer Review 2

Courtney, You have done such a great job of expressing your interpretation of Paul’s words. I totally agree with your vision, society cannot sit still and be all there. I read a good quote the other day, “Wherever you are, be all there”. Seems so simple, doesn’t it? I enjoy your writing style, it is so calm to read and your metaphors hold a deep meaning. I especially admired how you worked in everyday activities like having a shower and eating dinner. Even these should be experienced in the present moment. We do this every SINGLE day however it goes on unacknowledged and outweighed by things that are ‘more’ important. You put it perfectly… “This is the point, isn’t it, Paul? Life. Breath. Acknowledgment of that”

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1 Response to Peer Review 2

  1. *Please attend to editing your work carefully. Here is what I have picked up:
    * enjoy’s your writing style,= enjoy your writing style, [‘s ???????].
    Overall your blogs and review are up to date. Good work Sarah…. more editing needed and some visual components. 🙂


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