Peer Review 3

Hey Gabby,
I love your honesty when you refer to your previous ideas on Picasso’s art, which I am certain many people also have. I agree, after the art gallery I had so much more of an appreciation for his works and able to analyse on a deeper level. I picked up of a few errors that could be easily resolved with a quick read over. As seen below in your sentence the first open speech mark is facing the wrong way as well as the analysis following the title, is an incorrect capital. These small mistakes are easy to fix and will improve the overall flow of your writing.
The painting ” Naked Women in the Rocking Chair”  Is definitely one which                             stimulates the mind
Overall a great blog filled with analytical thoughts to build from 🙂 🙂

https://gabriellechidiac98.wordpress.com/2016/09/11/picasso/comment-page-1/#comment-40

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