Peer Review: 7

Great letter Ronny!

I also wrote a letter to Orwell and it is great to see how the same question and topic can lead to such different approaches to his work. I really liked the correlation you made between Shooting an Elephant and Politics and the English Language. That was a link that I hadn’t put much thought into and yet now it seems like such a strong comparison that i should have already made! You have also done well in referencing all your quotes and ideas, keeping you safe from plagiarism. The inclusion of these quotes adds so much to your blog as they give examples for readers to really grasp what you are trying to say. The only thing I can suggest is to go into more depth, as it seems you could expand your great ideas to further layer your work. Great job and enjoy the last weeks of blogging!


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