Nice creative piece! It sparks some ideas in me and so I am thinking maybe I should have done this topic for my blog this week! I would say the overriding feeling I get from your entry is the painter’s frustration, pinpointed as he replays in his mind, “try to paint him the first time, he doesn’t like it, so I paint him a second and third and finally the fourth…”. I think your link to King Richard is excellent and fits perfectly. Looking at the context of this time, I know the idea of leaders wanting to create a false image of themselves was very common and so you’ve done this well in your entry. My only suggestion would be to look at your last sentence. I think it could be reworded to create a stronger meaning and ending to your blog. Overall great job! I hope you’re enjoying the wonders of Shakespeare!
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