Peer Review 6

Hey Silvana! This is a great creative blog and sonnet! You did really well in fitting the writing style of Shakespeare’s time in your lexical choices such as “How couldst

This is a great creative blog and sonnet! You did really well in fitting the writing style of Shakespeare’s time in your lexical choices such as “How couldst i loveth those eyes if ‘t”. I can really understand the portrayal you are creating in this blog in the sense that love is not always easy and that people find themselves drawn to things that they do not expect such as this persona’s mistress. This sonnet also fits perfectly into Shakespeare’s overriding theme of humans searching for meaning and having an overwhelming sense of existential angst. I can see you sustaining this powerful theme at the end of the sonnet when the persona almost begs God to be happy and free from the pain he is currently feeling. My only suggestion would be to read over your work and be sure to capitalise certain words such as ‘I’ and ‘God’ so that the grammar fits the great standard of your creativity. Good job!

Sarah

Found at: https://silvana97blog.wordpress.com/2017/05/12/my-mistress-eyes/comment-page-1/#comment-50

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