Peer Review 2: Reading Australia

Hey Ronny! I am very impressed by your blog this week on Judith Wright’s poem and your ability to succinctly analyse while also being thorough. You have effectively informed us about Wright’s use of Strontium and how and why she links this to the cycle of life. Your grammar is perfect and structure is well written. You smoothly move from one idea to the next and have created a comprehensive and well-delivered idea. My only possible suggestion is to write in a more blog-style, using more personal reflection and ideas. Great Post 🙂

Located at:

https://ronnykamaledine.wordpress.com/2017/08/14/engl328-reading-australia-week-3/

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1 Response to Peer Review 2: Reading Australia

  1. So I have found other peer reviews, but they don’t appear under your drop-down category menu. Can you try to fix this? I can help if you ask…. 🙂
    MG

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