Peer Review 4: Reading Australia

Hey Rachel 🙂
I really enjoyed this post, you express yourself so beautifully and portray such a deep and truthful perception of light. I think our ideas on this are very similar in the sense that light can have a profound impact on every part of your life. I like that you are able to acknowledge this and express these ideas so freely. Your incorporation of photos is perfect for this blog post as it caught my attention straight away and added an extra touch of beauty. I think you could turn this paragraph into quite a nice piece of poetry and your work choices are very rhythmic. Overall, a great creative post! One of my favourites 🙂
Sarah

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