Peer Review 7: Reading Australia

Hello Patricia,
Thank you for this insightful blog. I can see through this creative expression that you have thought about the impact that light has on our life. I like that you are incorporated all aspects of how light is good for us and how you have personified light in his entry. I would have loved to see more on how light made you feel and perhaps look into expanding each idea little more as the transitions between ideas could be smoother.
Good work 🙂
Sarah

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