I enjoy your spin on the time we spent with David Malouf. It is interesting how everyone has different highlights from the tutorial. I guess this is the beauty of literature. We always relate certain elements to ourself and find certain things more relevant.
I like your inclusion of a video, as it adds depth to your blog post. I think adding the weblink here would be beneficial as it gives your readers a place to go for more information and keeps your posts clear of any copyright issues.
Great job, Sarah